Question

【題目】最近，你班就“90后的成長(zhǎng)”話題進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)社會(huì)調(diào)查，調(diào)查顯示，人們對(duì)“90后”青少年的現(xiàn)狀褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约鹤鳛橐幻��?0后”的感想。

優(yōu)點(diǎn)	缺點(diǎn)	你自己的感想
1. 思想獨(dú)立、有志向…… 2. 樂于接受并嘗試新事物…… 3. 自信、熱情…… 4. 珍惜友情，善于交流……	1. 依賴性強(qiáng)…… 2. 心理抗挫能力不足…… 3. 缺乏責(zé)任感…… 4. 自控力差……	(至少兩點(diǎn))

注意：1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 參考詞匯：挫折frustration

4. 文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

Recently our class has conducted a survey about 'The growth of post-90’s generation'. People have different opinions on it.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our class has conducted a survey about “The growth of post-90’s generation”. People have different opinions on it.

Some people think that the post-90’s generation are confident, ambitious and independent in thinking. They are fond of new things, ready to accept and try them. What’s more, they have many new ideas, which makes them more creative. It's especially worth mentioning that they are enthusiastic and caring. They treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others.

However, others argue that the post-90’s generation are too self-centered and dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study. They tend to live a comfortable life but are less able to overcome frustration. Besides, some of them lack the sense of responsibility and don't know how to show gratitude to others. Worse still, many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet.

As a member of them, I think we post-90’s generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses, so that we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves. Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，社會(huì)上對(duì)90后的成長(zhǎng)現(xiàn)狀褒貶不一，為此該班作了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，總結(jié)了幾個(gè)主要的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，且要求考生在最后要發(fā)表自己的感想。為此寫作前，一定要把握這三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)里要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，列好提綱，不能遺漏任何要點(diǎn)。要求中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,所以表達(dá)起來(lái)較為容易；除此之外。寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，上下文要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要靈活多變。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

范文正確地表達(dá)了作文的要點(diǎn)，而且中心突出，觀點(diǎn)明確、言簡(jiǎn)意賅；除此之外，還較準(zhǔn)確地運(yùn)用了一些詞組：如have different opinions on sth在某事上有不同觀點(diǎn)；be fond of sth喜歡某物；It is worth doing sth值得做某事；be good at 擅長(zhǎng)于；tend to do傾向于干某事； lack the sense of responsibility 缺乏責(zé)任感；be addicted to對(duì)…上癮等。好的句式：如They are fond of new things, ready to accept and try them. What’s more, they have many new ideas, which makes them more creative.What’s more更甚者，插入語(yǔ)表遞進(jìn)，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句修飾前面的先行詞new ideas；Worse still, many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet. 考查結(jié)構(gòu)so…that…如此…以至于…that后是結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句； Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others. Only位于句首后跟狀語(yǔ)，引導(dǎo)部分倒裝。