“雙十一”現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)成為購物的節(jié)日,在這天,人們紛紛在網(wǎng)上購物,尋找自己喜愛的商品。以下是關于“雙十一”來源和發(fā)展,請就此寫一篇短文。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

起源

起源于1990年代南京的部分大學。

日期

每年的11月11日,所以在中國又被稱為“光棍節(jié)”

慶祝方式

年輕人舉行各種聚會,并尋找自己心愛的人

發(fā)展

2011年起,“雙十一”開始成為電子商務的標志。在那天,人們可以用很便宜的價格在網(wǎng)上購買喜歡的產(chǎn)品

存在的問題

人們花錢買很多自己并不需要的商品,或者買到價高質(zhì)次的商品。投訴增多,增加煩惱

你的建議

雙十一購物給消費者帶來便利,但是購買時應該理性,要選擇有信譽的商店并購買需要的商品, 以防被騙

參考詞匯: 光棍節(jié):Singles Day 電子商務:E-commerce

【寫作要求】

1. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

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Double 11, originating from some universities in Nanjing in the 1990s, is called Singles Day in China because it falls on Nov.11by coincidence when many young people will hold many parties to look for the one they love. Since 2011, Double 11 has become the symbol of E-commerce, when people can buy lots of things they like at a low price. But, at the same time , people might buy some products they don’t need at all or buy something with a high price but in low quality. What’s worse, there are always lots of complaints and they may therefore get annoyed for this. In my opinion, though shopping online on that day brings consumers a lot of convenience, they should be reasonable and buy in the shop with a good reputation in case of being cheated.

【解析】

試題分析:本文是一篇提綱作文,要求以所給的提示寫一篇短文。根據(jù)提示的信息可知,文章應寫成記敘文,文章用第三人稱,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象,適當?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點,使文章內(nèi)容豐滿,并達到要求的字數(shù)。此外,為了提高文章檔次,還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯,并添加關聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達格式規(guī)范,語言流暢。五個句子涵蓋了所有的要點,符合題目的要求。本文的亮點是運用了復雜的句式如定語從句,賓語從句、狀語從句和被動語態(tài)等,提升了文章的檔次; 現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語 、what’s more 、in case of .等結構的運用也為文章增添了亮色。

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