Question

【題目】 假如你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們國重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。請(qǐng)給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；

2. 活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 結(jié)語已為你寫好。

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示信息說明邀請(qǐng)Lucy去參加的活動(dòng)和時(shí)間等。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：邀請(qǐng)、時(shí)間、具體活動(dòng)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)憽?/span>3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

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