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假如你是李華，是�？�記者。請你為�？瘜懸黄�英語短文，介紹最近在我國很多城市發(fā)生的霧霾（haze）天氣。請參考以下要點：

1. 危害；

2. 原因；

3. 如何自我防護。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China. It is one of the most dangerous weather conditions. Many accidents have occurred due to low visibility caused by haze. What’s worse, it also affects our health. If breathing in haze, people may feel uncomfortable and get ill.

The reason for haze is air pollution, which results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sites.

In view of the above, we do need to protect ourselves from haze pollution. First of all, in case of haze pollution, neither should we open the windows nor take exercise before the sun rises and after sunset. Besides, we’d better wear masks when we go outside. What’s more, we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to diseases.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文為任務型作文，要求從三個方面來介紹霧霾：危害；原因以及如何自我防護。此類作文考查了學生的閱讀能力、理解能力和表達能力等綜合能力。要求學生作文條理清晰，內(nèi)容必須包括這三個方面，并用句子來分別闡述這三個方面。

寫作亮點：本篇觀點明確，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，句子簡潔明了，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：后置定語caused by haze，定語從句The reason for haze is air pollution, which results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sites，時間狀語從句等。What’s worse, In view of the above，in case of， build up等詞匯First of all，Besides，What’s more等連接詞的運用為文章增色不少。