Question

16．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
      3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分．
After the college entrance examination，most students will face a seriously question：Should they choose a good major and a good university first？Some students preferred to consider majors first so that they can learn which they are interested in．This will make it possible for them to take their most favorite job in the future．Therefore，those who think differently believe that the learning environment is important and that graduates from a leading university is more likely to find good jobs．
In my opinion，the best choice is good major at a good university．If we cannot obtain all，the first thing to consider is a good major，because wherever they study，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者對上大學(xué)時該選專業(yè)和學(xué)校 的看法．高考之后大多數(shù)同學(xué)都將面臨一個問題--要先選一個好的專業(yè)，還是先選一個
好的學(xué)校呢？有的同學(xué)認為選對專業(yè)很重要，這樣他們將來可以從事他們喜歡的工作；有的同學(xué)認為學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境很重要，要選擇有名的大學(xué)．
但是作者認為最好的選擇就是在一個好大學(xué)里面學(xué)習(xí)自己喜歡的專業(yè)．

解答 After the college entrance examination，most students will face a seriouslyquestion：Should they choose a good major anda good university
                                                                                                serious                                                                    or
first？Some students preferredto consider majors first so that they can learn which they are interested in．This will make it possible for them to 
                                prefer                                                                        what
take their  most favorite job in the future．Therefore，those who think differently believe that the learning environment is important and that
            去掉most                                       However                                                                                               
graduates from a leading university is more likely to find good jobs．
                                                  are
In my opinion，the best choice is∧good major at a good university．If we cannot obtain all，the first thing to consider is a good major，because
                                                 a                                                                               both
wherever theystudy，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．
              we
1．seriously 改為 serious；考查詞性，這里修飾的是question，名詞，所以要用形容詞．
2．a(chǎn)nd 改為 or；考查連詞，這里用 or 表示選擇．
3．preferred 改為 prefer；考查時態(tài)，本文講述的是一個客觀現(xiàn)象，要用一般現(xiàn)在時．
4．which 改為 what；考查關(guān)系詞的用法，which在從句中不作成分，what可以做從句的某一成分，從句中介詞in缺少賓語，所以用what作in的賓語．
5．去掉 most；考查最高級，favorite本身意為"最喜歡的"，再加most意思重復(fù)．
6．Therefore 改為 However；考查連詞的用法，therefore意為"因此"表結(jié)果，however意為"然而"表轉(zhuǎn)折，根據(jù)上下文意思這里應(yīng)該是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用However．
7．is 改為 are；考查系動詞，這里句子的主語是those，"who think differently…from a leading university"是定語從句，所以系動詞用are．
8．good 前面加 a；考查冠詞，major是可數(shù)名詞，意為"專業(yè)"，加a表示一個．
9．a(chǎn)ll 改為 both；考查both和all的區(qū)別，作為"都"來講，both指"兩者都"，all指三者或三者以上．
10．they 改為 we；考查人稱代詞，這里應(yīng)與句子的主語we保持一致．

點評 閱讀短文，了解大意，確定基本時態(tài)；運用所掌握的基本知識多方面分析每個句子以及句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，找出文中錯誤加以修改．