Question

【題目】作為中學生，我們應該如何理解父母對我們的嚴格要求和愛護呢？下面是三名高中生想對父母說的話，請你就此談談自己的看法。

想對父母說……

我需要放松， 希望有時候能看看電視，上上網(wǎng)。 我需要朋友，希望能和朋友們一起說笑、玩鬧。 我希望得到父母的信任，他們能像朋友一樣待我。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120詞左右； 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

In China, children are the center of each family, ___________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

In China, children are the centre of each family. All parents wish their children, especially senior high students, could go to top universities and have a bright future. So all the children are always expected to make full use of their time to study. They are not allowed to watch TV, play the computer games or go out to play with their friends .

Some students just complain that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs. They wish to have their own time to watch TV or surf the Internet. They also hope to chat or play with their friends.

In my opinion, our parents are responsible for us. Perhaps out of nothing but love, they are sometimes too strict with us. But I think we should learn to communicate with them, telling them that we’ll work harder and will never let them down. Only by doing this will we earn trust and respect from them

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語be expected to do 期望做某事；be concerned about關心；in one’s opinion 在某人看來；be responsible for 對……負責；make full use of充分利用；But I think we should learn to communicate with them, telling them that we’ll work harder and will never let them down.這個句子telling做伴隨狀語；Only by doing this will we earn trust and respect from them這個句子運用到only +狀語+部分倒裝 ；