Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

During last summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job. I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep.

This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this forgettable experience. Not only is it kind of fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but also I learn to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】found后加a

【2】worked→working

【3】realized→realize

【4】On→In

【5】came后面的to去掉

【6】very→so

【7】tiring→tired

【8】forgettable→unforgettable

【9】or→and

【10】which→who

【解析】

試題分析：本文是作者暑假打工的感悟。

【1】found后加a 句意：我找到一份臨時工作。故在found后加a。

【2】worked→working 現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語，表主動關(guān)系，故把worked改為working。

【3】realized→realize 此處Not until I experienced it did I realized是部分倒裝，因為前面有did，故后面要用動詞原形，故把realized改為realize。

【4】On→In 固定詞組：in the morning“在上午”，故把On改為In。注意大寫開頭。

【5】came后面的to去掉 home是副詞，前面不需要介詞，故把to去掉。

【6】very→so 固定搭配：so...that...“如此……以致于……”，故把very改為so。

【7】tiring→tired 句意：我感到累。形容人的感受用-ed形式的形容詞。故把tiring改為tired。

【8】forgettable→unforgettable 句意：我很高興我有這次難忘的經(jīng)歷。故把forgettable改為unforgettable。

【9】or→and 表示“月亮和星星”。故把or改為and。

【10】which→who 根據(jù)句意可知，those指人，所以后面的定語從句用who引導(dǎo)，故把which改為who。