【題目】假定英語課課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Jennifer,

I am writing to thank you. You coming to my birthday party yesterday gave me a big surprise, which I have never expected. You cannot imagine how exciting I was at the moment. To be honesty, it is because of your coming why I feel it is the best birthday I have ever had.

The dictionary you gave me as birthday present is just all what I need. I firmly believe that it will be of great helpful in my English study I cannot thank you enough for what you did for me.

Together with all my classmates, I will do what I can to make you stay in China enjoyable. If there is everything you need, let me know and we will be more than glad to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

【解析】 此處修飾后置位名詞coming（來臨），應(yīng)填形容詞，故將your改為yours。

句意為你昨天能來參加我的生日派對，這是我之前沒有料想到的。此處表示 在昨晚前已經(jīng)發(fā)生的動作，應(yīng)該用過去完成時，故將have改為had。

此處應(yīng)該修飾主語我，應(yīng)將excite加ed。故將exciting改為excited。

To be honest為固定短語，意思為老實說，故將honesty改為honest。

這句話之前已經(jīng)有because，同一句中why和because不能同時存在，否則句意重復(fù)，故將why劃去。

名詞present前應(yīng)該有修飾語，故要添加冠詞a或者形容詞my。

句意為你送我的生日禮物恰巧是我想要的，just已經(jīng)表示恰巧，所以all在這里重復(fù)多余，故刪去all。

Be of great help 為固定搭配，意為對我很有幫助，且great后并無名詞，故將helpful改為help。

Everything意為每件事，每件東西，而anything意為任何事，任何東西，此處句意為如果你有任何事需要我?guī)椭脑�，故�?/span>everything改為anything。

前后搭配應(yīng)該一致，本文一直只有作者一個人出現(xiàn)，所以應(yīng)該只有他一個人，故將we改成I。

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