Question

假設(shè)你是李明。上周末你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack在給你的電子郵件中問(wèn)你打算在大學(xué)里學(xué)什么專業(yè)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，給他回一封100詞左右的郵件。
禮節(jié)性的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)并引出問(wèn)題。
首先打算學(xué)農(nóng)學(xué)。理由是：
農(nóng)業(yè)是人類生存的基礎(chǔ)。
還有很多人在挨餓。
你的雄心壯志。
學(xué)醫(yī)也行；希望Jack提供建議

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How is everything going?
In your last letter, you asked me what major I’d like to choose at university. I have two majors in mind.
First, I intend to choose agriculture science. Why? Because food is fundamental to our existence. However, food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death. It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming.
Secondly, medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is another worthy way to save lives. Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，上周末你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack在給你的電子郵件中問(wèn)你打算在大學(xué)里學(xué)什么專業(yè)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，給他回一封100詞左右的郵件。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且比較具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：have …in mind考慮，intend to打算， look forward to盼望。 In your last letter, you asked me what major I’d like to choose at university. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句，medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is another worthy way to save lives. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句。還有文章還使用了First, Secondly, However,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。