Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應包括下列要點：焦慮癥狀頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好等1)考前制定好合適的復習計劃2)睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠．

注意：1. 根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。

詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：頭暈 — dizzy (adj.)

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.___________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, and some will suffer from lack of sleep. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we have to get rid of them.

First of all, it’s important for us to make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us have a sound sleep. Besides, enough rest can make us energetic and perform well in an exam.

Finally, I hope everybody can do a good job in each exam.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文對考生的要求較高，要求考生首先讀懂原文，再根據(jù)文字提示寫作。寫信的要點都隱含在信中，再讀懂文章的基礎上，要考生自己歸納出來，再一一進行解決，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成文，也要注意運用適當?shù)母呒壘湫腿缍ㄕZ從句，強調(diào)句等讓文章不顯得那么平淡，而有文采。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語suffer from遭受；have an effect on 對。。有影響；First of all首先；get rid of擺脫；First of all, it’s important for us to make careful plans for every exam.這個句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us have a sound sleep這個句子運用到which引導的非限制性定語從句；