Question

【題目】以吸煙有害健康為題寫一篇短文，字數(shù)100左右，內(nèi)容要求包括：

1.現(xiàn)狀：中國吸煙者約占將近一半，吸煙者越來越年輕，我們中有不少中學生也在抽煙。

2.原因：有的認為是時髦(a kind of fashion)、有的認為是樂趣、有的認為可以提神(refresh oneself)。

3.害處：吸煙有害健康，可導致多種疾病，是一種金錢的浪費，甚至會引起火災。

4.勸告大家不要吸煙。

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Answer 1

【答案】Smoking is bad for people’s health. There are more than half people smoking in China. Even though smoking is very bad, the number of smokers keeps growing, and the average age of the smokers is getting younger. Even some students smoke, too. Why do so many people smoke today? Because some people think smoking is a kind of fashion or something interesting. Most people are so busy with their work that they smoke to fresh themselves; however, I don’t think smoking is good. If you smoke too much, you will get diseases. It also costs a lot of money. In order to keep healthy, we should not smoke.

【解析】

本文書面表達屬于應用文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一篇電子郵件：以吸煙有害健康為題寫一篇短文，字數(shù)100左右，內(nèi)容要求包括：1.現(xiàn)狀：中國吸煙者約占將近一半，吸煙者越來越年輕，我們中有不少中學生也在抽煙。2.原因：有的認為是時髦(a kind of fashion)、有的認為是樂趣、有的認為可以提神(refresh oneself)。3.害處：吸煙有害健康，可導致多種疾病，是一種金錢的浪費，甚至會引起火災。4.勸告大家不要吸煙。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關鍵詞，如：Smoking is bad for people’s health（吸煙對人的健康有害）；the number of smokers keeps growing（吸煙者的數(shù)量保持增長）；a kind of fashion or something interesting（一種時尚或有趣的事情）；get diseases（生�。┑取�

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。