Question

近來很多高中畢業(yè)生利用暑假期間學(xué)習(xí)開車，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)開車的利與弊的文章。

利	弊
1．一種非常有積極意義的經(jīng)歷 2．為你提供方便 3．給你獨(dú)立的感覺	1．市內(nèi)停車不便 2．費(fèi)用較高 3．安全隱患

注意：1. 文章開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢。

3. 詞數(shù)：12 0詞左右。

4. 參考詞匯：

These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual. ____________

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Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual. Knowing that you are able to drive makes you more confident. Also, ability to drive gives you independence, which means you can go wherever and whenever you want. It is much more convenient and quicker to get around in a car than to wait for a bus.

On the other hand, it is sometimes difficult to find a parking place in the city with the number of cars increasing so fast. Besides, it can be expense—not just to buy a car, but also to pay for petrol and all the repairs your car will need. Apart from that, lack of experience may get you into a car accident. If so, it will be wiser to take a bus.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。