Question

【題目】假如你是高二年級李華，你剛剛參加完一個(gè)為期一個(gè)月的語言學(xué)校的英語培訓(xùn)，請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封抱怨信。

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。

2. 信的開頭已為你寫好，字?jǐn)?shù)不算在內(nèi)。

不滿原因	1. 學(xué)生太多，影響效果。 2. 不提供午飯，最近的餐館（cafe）要走20分鐘 3. 社會(huì)活動(dòng)少，只有排球；沒有組織參觀游覽，與廣告不符。
要求	退款，否則采取進(jìn)一步行動(dòng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have just returned from a month’s stay at your Falcon School of Languages, and I am writing to express my unhappiness with your program.

I thought that a language course would help me improve my English. But the classes had far too many students, which stopped me from making my progress.

To make matters worse, no meals were provided. When I wanted to eat I had to go to the nearest café, which was 20 minutes away.

You said in your ad that students could enjoy many social activities. However, volleyball was the only activity offered, and although there were many interesting things to see in the city, no trips were organized.

You can imagine how upset I am to have wasted my time and money. Please give me my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文是一篇英語書信。格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，布局合理，使用高級句子。I thought that a language course would help me improve my English. that引導(dǎo)賓語從句；But the classes had far too many students, which stopped me from making my progress. which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；To make matters worse獨(dú)立成分的運(yùn)用堪稱經(jīng)典；When I wanted to eat I had to go to the nearest café, which was 20 minutes away.時(shí)間狀語從句和非限制性定語從句完美結(jié)合；volleyball was the only activity offered過去分詞作后置定語；although there were many interesting things to see in the city, no trips were organized. although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；另外，But，However, or的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。