Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)張強(qiáng)即將去國(guó)外讀書，下面四幅圖描述了同學(xué)們?yōu)樗�送行的過(guò)程，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片的先后順序用英語(yǔ)寫一篇日記。

注意：1. 日記的開頭已為你寫好。

2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。

Monday, March 10 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】Monday, March 10 Fine

This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us. We were all moved to tears. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.

At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment. True friendship won't be weakened by distance. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。同學(xué)張強(qiáng)要去國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，本篇要求考生根據(jù)圖片所給的內(nèi)容寫一篇日記。

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總

要求：

根據(jù)圖片提示，該日記主要包括以下內(nèi)容

張強(qiáng)發(fā)言，表達(dá)對(duì)友誼的看法

同學(xué)們給張強(qiáng)特別的禮物

張強(qiáng)讓同學(xué)在T恤上簽名

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第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

hold a meeting/ study abroad/ in the beginning/ everlasting/ move to tears/ present/ sign/ precious/ memorize/ hear-shaped

第三步：連詞成句

1. This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.

2. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us.

3. We were all moved to tears.

4. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together.

5. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.

6. At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment.

7. True friendship won't be weakened by distance.

8. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.

第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）

表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…

狀語(yǔ)從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…

定語(yǔ)從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改潤(rùn)色（加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)）