Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

There is a growing debate about the most effective way for students to study. Traditionally studying alone was thought to be the best way to ensure good exam results. When studying alone you can focus your mind better than when you are with others. You also have the freedom to choose what topic to study and when, as you don't need file agreement of others. Students that prefer to study alone often say that when they study with their classmates they waste a lot of time because the discussion is often about non-study topics such as television or holidays.

In the last few years, however, more and more students have started studying in groups. There are several reasons many students prefer this method. First, they find that studying is more fun as they can share the experience with others rather than staying in their rooms. In groups, they can discuss the subject together and when something is not understood they can ask each other questions. They can use the knowledge of their classmates to help improve their own knowledge. Finally by discussing the topic they are able to both understand and remember it better.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

(1) 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

(2) 然后以約120個詞就“獨自學(xué)習(xí)好還是與他人合作學(xué)習(xí)好”的主題發(fā)表看法，

并包括如下要點：

① 你喜歡獨自學(xué)習(xí)還是與他人合作學(xué)習(xí)；

② 根據(jù)你個人的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，簡述你的理由；

③ 你的老師對你的學(xué)習(xí)方式的看法和建議；

④ 你認為怎樣的學(xué)習(xí)方式才能取得最佳的學(xué)習(xí)效果。

[寫作要求]

1. 標題自定。

2. 可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

3.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評分標準] 概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

The Best Way to Learn

The article compares the benefits of studying alone to those of studying in groups. Studying alone allows students to remain focuses and avoid interruption, while group study creates a more enjoyable learning environment.

Personally, I prefer to study alone. I find studying alone more challenging and exciting. Each time I come up with an idea after long time thinking, I feel a great sense of achievement. Studying alone also allows me to develop independent thinking which is a very important skill I need as I grow older and must solve the problems myself without the help of parents and teachers. Our teachers often encourage us to study in groups. I enjoy my friends’ company, but in group study, I find we spend far less time studying and more time playing games and having fun. It is for these reasons that I believe the most effective way to learn new knowledge is by studying alone.

【解析】

試題分析：寫作時要考慮以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準確到位，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。

【亮點說明】本篇作文層次清晰，要點全面，表達流暢，切合作文要求，句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。文中使用連接詞和插入語，如Personally等， 而且文中使用了大量的長句，顯示了作者對語言的把控力。如定語從句It is for these reasons that I believe the most effective way to learn new knowledge is by studying alone.狀語從句Each time I come up with an idea after long time thinking等。