16.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的作文. 文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪詞:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞.
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Ten years ago,I had worked as a night guard in a factory.On a rainy night,all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden.I rushed out and could see nothing.Lucky for me,the warning system was directly connected with the police station.Three or four minutes late,four police car arrived at the front gate.They searched for the factory carefully,tried to find something unusual.In the end,I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit,that caused the accident.