Question

【題目】假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不給分。

Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining hardly. I was seating in my classroom by myself. "We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You'll say goodbye to your new classmates." That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears. Although I had studied at school for only two months, I really loved everything there. What's more, the teaching conditions here are much more better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】hardly改為hard

【2】seating改為sitting/seated

【3】去掉back

【4】That改為What

【5】on改為in

【6】at后加the

【7】there改為here

【8】去掉more

【9】which改為who/that

【10】Therefore改為However

【解析】

【1】這里的hard為副詞，修飾動(dòng)詞raining。

【2】seat是及物動(dòng)詞，意思是“使……坐下”。sit為不及物動(dòng)詞，不能單獨(dú)使用。

【3】return含有back之意，所以應(yīng)該刪掉back。

【4】what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句，指代上句的內(nèi)容。

【5】in one’s ears為固定搭配，意思是“在某人的耳朵里回響”。

【6】這里的school特指作者所在的school，所以應(yīng)該用定冠詞the。

【7】作者目前還在這個(gè)學(xué)校，所以應(yīng)該用here，不是there。

【8】much修飾比較級(jí)better，more多余，故刪掉。

【9】根據(jù)句意可知，應(yīng)該用who或that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

【10】前后兩句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以應(yīng)該用表示轉(zhuǎn)折的however，而不是表示因果的therefore。