Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

音樂被公認(rèn)為全人類共同的語(yǔ)言，是我們生活中必不可少的一部分。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示信息，寫一篇關(guān)于音樂的英語(yǔ)短文。

●音樂的重要性；

●你所知道的音樂類型；

●你最喜歡哪一類音樂？說(shuō)明你喜歡的理由。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Music

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Answer 1

【答案】

Music

Music is a universal language to all human beings, which has the most powerful magic in the world. First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at work and life. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we meet difficulties and feel sad. In addition, music can be of great help to learn another culture.

There are different varieties of music, such as popular music, classical music, co untry music, jazz music, rap music, rock music and so on.

Of all the music, I like popular music best. For one thing, with beautiful melody, it is pleasant to hear; for another, most popular music deals with the topics of love and friendship, which appeal to us young people.

【解析】

本文是一篇議論文，以音樂為話題展開。這篇文章具有較高的邏輯層次性，首先第一段介紹了音樂給人帶來(lái)的好處；第二段列舉了作者所知道的幾種音樂類型；第三段講述了作者最喜歡的音樂以及原因。文章結(jié)構(gòu)明顯，條理清晰，抓住題干中所給的主要信息進(jìn)行敘述，避免了偏題的可能性。值得我們模仿與學(xué)習(xí)。

【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥】

本文圍繞題干所給的信息逐一展開，運(yùn)用了較多的連接詞將全文進(jìn)行串聯(lián)。如：In addition；Of all the music等等詞來(lái)將全文進(jìn)行串接，使得整篇文章不顯得松散。這里值得我們加以關(guān)注的一點(diǎn)是文章首段在講述音樂對(duì)人的影響中，不僅運(yùn)用到了美句Music is a universal language to all human beings, which has the most powerful magic in the world，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，作為總起句，同時(shí)也運(yùn)用了多個(gè)邏輯順序詞語(yǔ)，如：First，Second等。文中還運(yùn)用了多個(gè)值得積累的短語(yǔ)詞組：For one thing，for another，There are different varieties of等等。