Question

1．假如你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華．最近你代表你班參加了學(xué)校的漢字聽寫大賽（ Chinese Character Dictation Competition）．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖寫一篇英文日記．詞數(shù)不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇日記，屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時(shí)以第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)為主，寫作要點(diǎn)包括比賽前的準(zhǔn)備，比賽的表現(xiàn)與結(jié)果，比賽后的心理感受．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：announce（宣布）； hope to do（希望做某事）；volunteere to do（自愿做某事）；approach（接近）；more and more（越來越…）；got stuck （卡�。�；win the first prize（取得第一名）； flashed into my mind（在我的頭腦中閃現(xiàn)）；belonge to （屬于）．
高分句型：1．Last week our teacher announced that a Chinese Character Dictation Competition would be held in the Auditorium on April 3．
                 that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)賓語從句，從句中主語 a Chinese Character Dictation Competition 和動(dòng)詞held是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故賓語從句用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)．
                 2．In the following days，I busied myself preparing for the competition．
                  這里busy用作動(dòng)詞，busy sb （in） doing 意為"使某人忙于做某事"．
                3．As the competition was approaching，I felt more and more confident．
                 as引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語從句；more and more confident意為"越來越自信"．
                4．Some characters were①so challenging ①that many of the competitors got stuck ②while I was able to write most of them down and won the first prize． 
                ①so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)中that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)目的狀語從句；②while作為并列連詞在這里表示前后意義上的轉(zhuǎn)折．

解答 April 10，2016  Sunday                       Cloudy
Last week our teacher announced that a Chinese Character Dictation Competition would be held in the Auditorium on April 3（高分句型一）．Many of us were interested and hoped to participate，but only one competitor was allowed to each class．Luckily I got the chance．
In the following days，I busied myself preparing for the competition（高分句型二）．My classmates all volunteered to help．Some of them dictated to me various characters they found in the dictionary while others offered to check my answers（積極準(zhǔn)備比賽）．As the competition was approaching，I felt more and more confident（高分句型三）．The day finally came．Some characters were so challenging that many of the competitors got stuck while I was able to write most of them down and won the first prize（高分句型四）．（比賽的表現(xiàn)及結(jié)果）
When I was standing excitedly on the stage，pictures of my classmates helping and encouraging me flashed into my mind．The victory and honor belonged to all of us．（獲獎(jiǎng)后的個(gè)人感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于命題日記，首先要注意審題，明確文章要包含的要點(diǎn)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與人稱，運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯，句型以及語法規(guī)則，必要時(shí)運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型增加文章的感染力．