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13．假如你是李華，上周末你和美國網(wǎng)友Tom在QQ上交流了寒假旅游的計(jì)劃，且得知Tom有來中國旅游的想法．請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給她回封郵件：
要點(diǎn)：1）告知自己旅游詳細(xì)計(jì)劃（時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，方式，住宿等）； 2．）邀請Tom一起旅行．
要求：1）詞數(shù)100左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章連貫．
2）信的格式與開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I am writing to tell you my detailed traveling plan this winter．    
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇為電郵．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1）告知自己旅游詳細(xì)計(jì)劃（時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，方式，住宿等）； 2．）邀請Tom一起旅行．

解答 Dear Tom，
  I am writing to tell you my detailed traveling plan this summer．With my parents'permission，I've decided to cycle to Lhasa with my two classmates．
  We will first take a train to Chengdu，which is the starting point of the Chuanzang Road，and then begin our ride there．We plan to ride for about 12 days，enjoying the beautiful scenes along the road．We will live in the Youth Hotel In order to save some money．Staying in Lhasa for about 3 days，we are going to visit the Potala Palace and also see the sunset on the Potala Square．
  It is sure to be a special experience because we have not gone so far alone without parents nearby．I hope you can come to China and join us．
Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考生需熟悉書信格式．考生需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語法知識．