Question

11．主辦奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)曾經(jīng)是中國人的夢想．為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)偉大的夢想，70多歲的何振梁不辭辛苦地走訪了許多國家，尋求支持．2004年，他和他的團(tuán)隊(duì)經(jīng)受失敗，但2008年他們獲得成功．
寫作要求：
1、簡述所提供的材料；
2、你從他身上學(xué)到什么？你的夢想是什么？
3、聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際，談?wù)勀銥榱藢?shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想而做哪些準(zhǔn)備
寫作提示：
1、詞數(shù)120詞左右；
2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文為人物介紹及從人物身上學(xué)習(xí)到的東西以及聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勛约涸摓閴粝胱瞿男��?zhǔn)備．
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1、簡述所提供的材料；
2、你從他身上學(xué)到什么？你的夢想是什么？
3、聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際，談?wù)勀銥榱藢?shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想而做哪些準(zhǔn)備．

解答 As is known to us all，to host the Olympic Games is a Chinese's dream．In order to realize the great dream，He ZhenLiang who was seventy years old at that time，took all the trouble to visit many countries to seek for support．In 2004 he and his team suffered failure but in 2008 they won success．
Undoubtedly，from him I can learn that we should fight for our dream bravely．My dream is to be a soldier．I have been longing for the green uniform and handsome appearance so much．Therefore I take more exercise to make me stronger and stronger．Moreover I spare no efforts to get more and more knowledge，which makes it possible for me to be a good soldier．Even if I meet with any difficulty or failure，I will never give up my dream．Instead，I will face it confidently．
Dear friend，He Zhen Liang has set a good example for us to work hard for our dream．I do believe only if we put our heart into our dream can we achieve it one day

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