Question

9．這些年，在中國有很多高中學(xué)生不太重視對語文學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)．
1．描述現(xiàn)象；
2．分析原因：
A．身為中國人，已經(jīng)能夠很流暢地講漢語；
B．即使努力學(xué)習(xí)語文，考試成績依然未能有大的提高；
3．你自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．
請根據(jù)以上信息和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120 詞左右．
（注意：短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．）
These years in China，there have been lots of senior high students whoThese years in China，there have been lots of senior high students who pay little attention to Chinese learning．In fact，they would rather spend much time on other subjects，such as English，maths and physics than learn and go over Chinese．描述現(xiàn)象
I suppose there are at least two reasons．Firstly，they think they are all native Chinese，and have been able to speak Chinese very well．They regard Chinese as only a tool for basic communication，so they don't have to make themselves an expert of the Chinese language．On the other hand，they always find even they have studied hard on Chinese for a period，they still cann't get good marks in all exams．As a result，they give up Chinese．分析原因
I used to learn Chinese very hard but the result is not satisfactory．I believe Chinese is important and I must learn it better．自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們針對中國有很多高中學(xué)生不太重視對語文學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)象寫一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：描述現(xiàn)象；分析原因：A．身為中國人，已經(jīng)能夠很流暢地講漢語；B．即使努力學(xué)習(xí)語文，考試成績依然未能有大的提高；你自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為描述現(xiàn)象．第二部分為分析原因：A．身為中國人，已經(jīng)能夠很流暢地講漢語；B．即使努力學(xué)習(xí)語文，考試成績依然未能有大的提高；第三部分為自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．
重點短語與句型：
would rather do..than  do…寧愿做…而不愿做．．
 at least 至少
regard…as 把…看作是…
On the other hand另一方面
there have been lots of senior high students who pay little attention to Chinese learning此句為who 引導(dǎo)的定語從句
 they don't have to make themselves an expert of the Chinese language此句為make加賓語加賓語補足語

解答 These years in China，there have been lots of senior high students who pay little attention to Chinese learning．In fact，they would rather spend much time on other subjects，such as English，maths and physics than learn and go over Chinese．描述現(xiàn)象
    I suppose there are at least two reasons．Firstly，they think they are all native Chinese，and have been able to speak Chinese very well．They regard Chinese as only a tool for basic communication，so they don't have to make themselves an expert of the Chinese language．On the other hand，they always find even they have studied hard on Chinese for a period，they still cann't get good marks in all exams．As a result，they give up Chinese．分析原因
    I used to learn Chinese very hard but the result is not satisfactory．I believe Chinese is important and I must learn it better．自身的經(jīng)歷和看法

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．