Question

【題目】請根據下面內容提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”為題，用英文寫一篇短文。

注意：①短文須包括所有內容提示，可適當發(fā)揮；

②詞數：100左右

1. 飲食；2. 睡眠；3. 體育鍛煉。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays， more and more people's life is becoming better and better， and as we know， it is very important for us to keep healthy． （高分句型一）Here is some advice on how to keep healthy．【展示問題】Firstly， we should have a balanced diet． This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables． Besides， we should eat less junk food， like hamburgers． It's bad for our health． Secondly， we must try to sleep early at night and get up early in the morning． This point is especially important for the students． Thirdly， we must exercise every day， which makes us stronger and helps us relax．（高分句型二）【提出建議】To sum up， health is wealth． Keeping healthy is very important for us． I hope everybody can live a healthy life．【表達愿望】

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給內容比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些所給的點表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)，是提出建議，給出自己的觀點的，注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】

本例文層次緊湊，開始有總說，最后一段總結，中間四部分分別說明了題中給出的要點。用first,second,third,at last層次鮮明，邏輯性很強。因為文章是提出建議，所以范文中用了許多委婉的表達，如should ,You’d better等。文中使用高級詞匯和句子。as we know， it is very important for us to keep healthy．此處是as引導的讓步狀語從句；Keeping healthy is very important for us．動名詞做主語；另外，Besides，To sum up，等的運用為文章增色添彩。