Question

20．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（A ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
I went shopping with my wife．We had a lot of things to buy．We drive to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop．An hour late，we  came back to the car．But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door．But we asked a policeman for help．He was glad to help us．A few minute later，he got the  door open．Just then a man came up and shouted angrily，"What are you doing my  car？"We were surprising and went to see the number of the car．What you think they did then？We had to speak sorry to the man again and again．

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了作者和妻子開車去購物，回來時發(fā)現(xiàn)車門打不開，于是請警察幫忙．等車門打開后，一個人對我們大喊大叫，原來是開了別人的車門．

解答 I went shopping with my wife．We had a lot of things to buy．We drive to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop．An hour late，we  came back to the car．But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door．But we asked a policeman for help．He was glad to help us．A few minute later，he got the  door open．Just then a man came up and shouted angrily，"What are you doing∧my  car？"We were surprising and went to see the number of the car．What you think they did then？We had to speak sorry to the man again and again．
詳解：
1．drive改為drove；時態(tài)錯誤．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
2．the去掉；短語搭配錯誤．in front of在外部的前面，in the front of是內(nèi)部的前面．
3．late改為later；副詞錯誤．late是遲到的意思，句意表達的是一個小時后，要用later來構(gòu)成．
4．strangely改為strange；形容詞錯誤．句中strange作系動詞的表語，要用形容詞形式．
5．But改為So；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是因果，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
6．minute改為minutes；名詞錯誤．句中有a few修飾，可數(shù)名詞要用復數(shù)．
7．加with；短語搭配錯誤．do with處理…，常用短語．
8．surprising改為surprised；分詞錯誤．句中surprise作系動詞的表語，表示主語we的感受，要用過去分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．
9．they改為we；代詞錯誤．句意指代的是我們，不是他們．
10．speak改為say；短語搭配錯誤．say sorry to sb向某人道歉．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．常考的知識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．