Question

3．你將向?qū)W校的英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站投稿介紹年度熱詞"自拍照"（selfie）．
寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于自拍照的介紹．
定義：人們給自己拍的照片，通常用手機(jī)拍攝并分享到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上．
起源：2002年，一位澳大利亞人在某論壇上傳了一張自己 的照片，并把照片稱(chēng)為"selfie"．
現(xiàn)狀：（1）"selfie"以及自拍行為越來(lái)越流行；
 （2）牛津詞典把"selfie"列為"2013年度詞匯"．
評(píng)論：（1）自拍表達(dá)人類(lèi)希望分享的需求，促進(jìn)溝通；
（2）自拍讓人過(guò)于在意自己的外貌，忽視內(nèi)在美．
參考詞匯：論壇 forum        牛津Oxford
寫(xiě)作要求
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
定義]A"selfie"is a photo taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．[起源]The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．[現(xiàn)狀]Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．[評(píng)論]Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹selfie的提綱類(lèi)作文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：定義；起源；現(xiàn)狀以及評(píng)論．
高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和高分句型：
accompany 動(dòng)詞，伴隨，陪伴；
popularity 名詞，流行，受歡迎；
attach too much importance to  認(rèn)為…有重要性；
高分句型（一）
A"selfie"is a phototaken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．
taken和 shared 兩個(gè)過(guò)去分詞在句子里做后置定語(yǔ)修飾 a photo，表示被動(dòng)；
高分句型（二）
The word ①was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．
①用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；
②who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句

解答 A"selfie"is a photo①taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．（定義） The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．（起源） Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．（現(xiàn)狀） Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．（評(píng)論）However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)的文章，有一定難度．考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)；其次，不能簡(jiǎn)單翻譯句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句式來(lái)表達(dá)．要求考生在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中擴(kuò)大詞匯量以及儲(chǔ)備一定量的高級(jí)句式．