【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(八)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Nowadays in China, either in the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly woman, will gather in squares to dance with popular music. More and more young people are also participating the square dance now.

There are many reasons for their popularity. First of all, China has made a great progress in the social and economic development in the past decades, and people had more time and energy to enjoy their life. Therefore, doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.

However, dancers play loud music and take up lots of public places, where makes many people annoying. It is time that square dancers make some change.

【答案】woman改成women

with改成to

in

their改成its

去掉a

had改成have

therefore改成moreover/ besides

where改成which

annoying改成annoyed

should/ make改成made

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文。文章介紹在中國正在流行的廣場舞。

1.考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意:如今在中國,無論是在早上還是在晚飯后,人們,尤其是老年婦女,都會聚集在廣場上,按著流行音樂跳舞。結(jié)合句意可知此處用名詞復(fù)數(shù)故把woman改成women。

2.考查介詞。句意:如今在中國,無論是在早上還是在晚飯后,人們,尤其是老年婦女,都會聚集在廣場上,按著流行音樂跳舞。結(jié)合句意可知此處用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。to dance to popular music按著流行音樂跳舞,故把with改成to。

3.考查固定詞組。participate in(參加),故在participated后面
in。

4.考查形容詞性物主代詞。句意:它受歡迎的原因有很多。故把their改成its。

5.考查不可數(shù)名詞。此處progress(進(jìn)步)是不可數(shù)名詞,故把前面的a去掉。

6.考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)in the past decades可知句子用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài),句子主語是people,故把had改成have。

7.考查副詞。句意:首先,在過去的幾十年里,中國在社會和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展方面取得了巨大的進(jìn)步,人們有更多的時間和精力去享受生活。此外,跳廣場舞是人們健身的好方法。上下句是一種轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故把therefore改成moreover/ besides。

8.考查非限制性定語從句。句意:然而,舞者們會演奏吵鬧的音樂,并占據(jù)許多公共場所,這讓很多人感到厭煩。此處整個句子做先行詞,后面的非限制性定語從句用which引導(dǎo),故把where改成which。

9.考查過去分詞。句意:然而,舞者們會演奏吵鬧的音樂,并占據(jù)許多公共場所,這讓很多人感到厭煩。make+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語(過去分詞),故把annoying改成annoyed。

10.考查固定句式。句意:現(xiàn)在是廣場舞者做出一些改變的時候了。It is high time that 主語+(should)動詞原形/過去式,現(xiàn)在是該做某事的時間了,故在make前加should/ make改成made。

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