Question

【題目】假定你是高二學生李華，你在網(wǎng)上看到一個國際中學生組織將舉辦2017年暑期夏令營并對此很感興趣。請你給主辦方寫一封信提出申請，并咨詢相關(guān)情況。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1. 申請并介紹個人參營的原因和優(yōu)勢；

2. 咨詢夏令營時間及內(nèi)容安排；

3. 個人最期待的活動。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以適行文連貫；

3.開頭句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I have read your advertisement on the Internet that the Organization of International High School Students is to hold the 2017 Summer Camp._____________________________________

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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m writing to apply to join in the Summer Camp as I’ve been longing to take part in international fairs for high school students. In particular, I’m interested in English culture. What’s more, I’ve already got a good knowledge of English customs from the Internet, and I’m eager to make friends with young people throughout the world.

However, I find no detailed information included in your advertisement. I’d like to know when the camp starts and ends exactly. Besides, what special courses and activities are offered for foreign students?

I’m crazy about local folk music, so I hope there would be related courses if possible. Hopefully I would be admitted and your kind attention on my application would be greatly appreciated.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性作文，原文所給觀點需要做適當補充，可以用自己的實際情況進行說明，如參加意圖方面可以從拓寬視野，增強興趣，提高英語和自己的能力等方面展開。

我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。