Question

【題目】最近，教育部出臺(tái)新規(guī)，允許在校大學(xué)生休學(xué)一年進(jìn)行創(chuàng)業(yè)，引發(fā)了廣泛熱議。為此，你們學(xué)校將以此為話題組織英文演講比賽。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，字?jǐn)?shù)150左右，參與比賽。你的演講要包括以下幾個(gè)方面：

1、你對(duì)此新規(guī)的看法；

2、進(jìn)入大學(xué)的你是否會(huì)休學(xué)創(chuàng)業(yè)；

3、闡述上述兩點(diǎn)時(shí)必須各提供至少2條理由或論據(jù)加以支撐。

【寫作要求】

1．內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! I would like to begin my speech with my view on the policy itself.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! I would like to begin my speech with my view on the policy itself.

Personally, I applaud for this policy. As we all know, many college graduates can’t find a job upon their graduation. Starting a business, particularly before graduating, is a good way to ease the tension. Moreover, college students are the most energetic group, so encouraging them to be engaged in business early will benefit our nation with more innovation.

Nevertheless, beneficial as the policy is, not all the students prefer to doing business, me included. Money is the first problem to a poor student. It’s impossible to run a business without fund. Secondly, lack of social experience will surely make my business end in failure if started. Most importantly, I am not keen on business at all. A stable job and easy life is my biggest ambition.

To sum up, I wholeheartedly approve of the new regulation but won’t choose to establish my own business at college.

【解析】

試題分析：最近，教育部出臺(tái)新規(guī)，允許在校大學(xué)生休學(xué)一年進(jìn)行創(chuàng)業(yè)，引發(fā)了廣泛熱議。為此，你們學(xué)校將以此為話題組織英文演講比賽。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，字?jǐn)?shù)150左右，參與比賽。你的演講要包括以下幾個(gè)方面：1、你對(duì)此新規(guī)的看法；2、進(jìn)入大學(xué)的你是否會(huì)休學(xué)創(chuàng)業(yè)；3、闡述上述兩點(diǎn)時(shí)必須各提供至少2條理由或論據(jù)加以支撐。【寫作要求】1．內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫.要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】As we all know, many college graduates can’t find a job upon their graduation.句中運(yùn)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；Starting a business, particularly before graduating, is a good way to ease the tension.動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)；Moreover, college students are the most energetic group, so encouraging them to be engaged in business early will benefit our nation with more innovation.并列句和動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)的完美結(jié)合；Nevertheless, beneficial as the policy is, not all the students prefer to doing business, me included.部分否定出現(xiàn)在句中；Most importantly, I am not keen on business at all. A stable job and easy life is my biggest ambition.句中運(yùn)用了最高級(jí)；To sum up, I wholeheartedly approve of the new regulation but won’t choose to establish my own business at college.動(dòng)詞不定式的獨(dú)立成分和表示轉(zhuǎn)折的并列句巧妙結(jié)合。