Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

假如你是李華，現(xiàn)任你們學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席。你將代表學(xué)生會(huì)起草一份倡議書，號(hào)召全校同學(xué)行動(dòng)起來(lái)，為環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)做出自己的努力。同時(shí)下周六學(xué)校將組織同學(xué)在全市進(jìn)行環(huán)保宣傳活動(dòng)，征召志愿者到校學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名。

注意：(1)短文應(yīng)該包括以上所提供的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)詞數(shù)：100左右;(3)倡議書格式以提供，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(4)參考詞匯：征召(新人) recruit [v]

10 May, 2014

Dear brothers and sisters,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

University Students' Union

Answer 1

【答案】10 May, 2014

Dear brothers and sisters,

On behalf of the University Students' Union, I, the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campaign. It is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.

Do you cherish precious opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city. The University Students' Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers. Let's join our hands and take action immediately.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇倡議書，話題為學(xué)生熟知，與高中生的生活實(shí)際貼近，而且具有一定的開(kāi)放性，使得每個(gè)學(xué)生都能夠有話可說(shuō)，符合新課標(biāo)理念下的命題方向。首先簡(jiǎn)要介紹環(huán)保問(wèn)題之重要，號(hào)召同學(xué)們行動(dòng)起來(lái)，共同參與環(huán)保活動(dòng);其次就環(huán)保發(fā)出倡議，并征召志愿者。這樣既把考生限定在一定范圍之內(nèi)，又給予了考生相當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮的自由，有助于考生的作文脫穎而出。在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組： On behalf of 代表， call for 需要，join our hands 聯(lián)手，take action 采取行動(dòng)。 in charge of 負(fù)責(zé)，好句子有：man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; 這句話用了不定式做定語(yǔ)。