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16．隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的人擁有了自己的汽車．你班同學(xué)就此展開討論，提出兩種不同的觀點和看法．請你根據(jù)所提供的信息給報社寫一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法．  

學(xué)生	觀點
贊同者	1．方便、快捷、舒適的交通工具； 2．反映出國民生活條件提高，國家富強(qiáng)； 3．帶動其他行業(yè)發(fā)展．
反對者	1．廢氣污染嚴(yán)重； 2．汽車過多影響交通，導(dǎo)致更多事故； 3．停車問題日益突出．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear editor，
    I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars．
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Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章圖表和所給提示信息寫一封信，客觀介紹就"越來越多的人擁有了自己的汽車"這一問題的討論形成的不同觀點和看法．
寫作要點：1．開頭-引出話題；2．贊同者觀點及依據(jù)；3．反對者觀點及依據(jù)；4．反對者觀點及依據(jù)．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：with the development of（解釋某事），living conditions（如下），own sth（根據(jù)），be convenient（某人認(rèn)為），means of transportation（起重要作用），give off（影響某物），pollute the environment（也），have some bad effects （進(jìn)行一些娛樂活動），such as （例如），in one's view（就…而言）．
【高分句型一】
1．I'm writing to tell you about the discussion ①we recently had about ②whether it is good or not for families to own cars．
①此處是省略了關(guān)系代詞"that/which"的定語從句，先行詞為"the discussion"，關(guān)系代詞在從句中作賓語省略．
②此處是由連接詞"whether…or not"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，此處"whether"不可替換成"if"．
【高分句型二】
1．Some of us think it good to own a car．
此處是由"it"作形式賓語，賓補(bǔ)為"good"，真正的賓語為"to own a car"．
【高分句型三】
3．Besides，parking cars is another big problem．
此處是動名詞短語"parking cars"作主語，謂語動詞為"is"，表語為"another big problem"．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars．【高分句型一】（開頭-引出話題）
With the development of people's living conditions，more and more people have their own cars．Some of us think it good to own a car．【高分句型二】Firstly，it's a convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation tool．You can go to a lot of places at any time．Secondly，it shows that people are becoming richer，and the country stronger．It also makes businesses and industries develop faster．（贊同者觀點及依據(jù)）
Others have different opinions．They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment．Too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents．Besides，parking cars is another big problem．【高分句型三】（反對者觀點及依據(jù)）
In my view，people should think carefully before they buy a car．（自己觀點）
Yours truly，
Li Hua

點評 本文屬于對比觀點的題型．在寫作時要先提出討論的話題，然后分別說出支持方、反對方和中立方的觀點．在分述觀點的時候，要注意有層次地說出支持或反對的原因等．從詞語上，盡可能運用已經(jīng)學(xué)過的而且比較熟悉的詞組、短語，并且要力求變換各種句式，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、各種從句和固定句型等，盡量做到長句和短句的交錯使用．文中可以使用的短語有one the one hand，on the other hand，firstly，secondly，besides，what's more．