Question

【題目】書面表達

英國某教育機構寒假期間在倫敦舉辦國際高中生交流活動(international high school students’ exchange project),現(xiàn)征集參加人員。假定你是高中生李華,對此很感興趣,請根據(jù)以下寫作要點用英語給活動的負責人寫一封申請信。

要點如下: 1.表示對該活動的興趣;

2.簡要介紹你具備的能力(愛好英國和中國文學，擅長交流，幫助理解中國，生活自立等等）。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua,a senior high school student from China.I’m very excited to know that an international high school students’ exchange project will be held in London during this winter vacation.To be frank,I have an interest in it,so I’m writing to apply to be a member of it.

I’m good at English and Chinese culture.On the one hand,I have no difficulty in communicating.On the other hand,it’s a good chance to help other foreign students know more about China.In addition,I can handle my daily life quite well and I’m able to live independently.

I am sure this program will benefit me a lot.Looking forward to your positive reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇常見的書信寫作，可以采取三段式寫作，第一段自我介紹，表明寫信的目的，第二段根據(jù)題目要求具體闡述要點，第三段表達感謝或者期待�？忌�在審題的時候應該注意審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時態(tài)。時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，適當時候插入將來時態(tài)�？忌�在寫作時應該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達出來。表達時應該綜合運用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習慣方式，用地道的英語表達出來，力求做到語言準確無誤。然后根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結構連句成篇。

【亮點說明】本文語言凝練，論點鮮明，條理層次清晰。文章第一段自我介紹，表明寫信的目的I am Li Hua,a senior high school student from China，用名詞短語做同位語，使句子更加簡潔；I’m writing to apply to be a member of it用現(xiàn)在進行時態(tài)更符合語境；第二段根據(jù)題目要求，運用短語have no difficulty in doing 及句型it’s a good chance to do等表達要點；適當使用連詞on one hand...on the other hand，in addition 使文章條理清楚，連接緊湊。