Question

15．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修 改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分
Around the year 1900 Sven Hedin discovers the ruins of the Loulan Kingdom．He found the remains of buildings burying beneath the sand，together with a lot of treasure，including c oins and painted pots and wall paintings．When we went to the city，they saw the city walls，palaces，temples，workshops and towers．We found the ruins most interested．There was a ancient water system what ran through the middle of the city，and supplying water to the city．The desert was once a green land with huge trees，but they were cut down and that resulted from the city being buried by sand----how a pity!

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了大約1900年，Sven Hedin發(fā)現(xiàn)了樓蘭古國的遺跡，很多建筑都深埋于地下，上面被厚厚的沙子所覆蓋．

解答 Around the year 1900 Sven Hedin discovers the ruins of the Loulan Kingdom．He found the remains of buildings burying beneath the sand，together with a lot of treasur 
                                                                                                                                                                   
e，including coins and painted pots and wall paintings．When we went to the city，they saw the city walls，palaces，temples，workshops and towers．We found the r
                                                                                                                      
uins most interested．There was a ancient water system what ran through the middle of the city，and supplying water to the city．The desert was once a green land wit
                                             
h huge trees，but they were cut down and that resulted from the city being buried by sand----how a pity!
                                                                                                                     

      詳解：
      1．discovers改為discovered   時間是1900年，應該使用一般過去時 
        2．burying改為buried      the remains of buildings與bury之間是邏輯被動關系，應該使用過去分詞作后置定語
       3．treasure改為treasures     treasure屬于可數(shù)名詞，前面有a lot of 修飾，應該使用復數(shù)形式
       4．they改為we    因為前后句子都是主語we，所以人稱應該一致
       5．interested改為interesting    此處指的是遺跡是非常有趣的，-ing結尾的形容詞指的是事物
      6．a 改為an   ancient屬于元音開頭，使用an
      7．what 改為which/that      ancient water system 后面跟的是定語從句，從句中缺少的是主語，所以使用關系代詞
      8．and去掉    supplying water to the city在句中屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語不是并列關系，不能使用并列連詞
      9．from改為in   result  in  導致  result  from由…導致，根據(jù)句意可知，此處是導致了
     10．how 改為what   感嘆句中 how后跟形容詞副詞而what后跟名詞，這里a pity是名詞，使用what

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．