Question

5．你的堂兄Jayson 剛剛結(jié)束2016年高考（the College Entrance Examination），開始了為期兩個(gè)多月的假期，請(qǐng)你按要求給他寫封e-mail，為他的假期提出良好建議，讓他的假期更有意義．詞數(shù)100左右．為使文章連貫可以增添細(xì)節(jié)，開頭已給出．
要點(diǎn)：1．學(xué)習(xí)一技之長（游泳，駕駛…） 2．出去旅游
3．陪伴父母                                        4．自己給出其他建議．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，為堂兄提出假期的建議，主要包括四個(gè)方面1．學(xué)習(xí)一技之長（游泳，駕駛…）； 2．出去旅游；3．陪伴父母；  4．自己給出其他建議．用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來時(shí)，第一人稱．
重要的短語和句型：
Congrtulations to you祝賀你
First and foremost首先
Last but not least最后但是不是最不重要的
it（形式主語） is a good idea to have a nice trip，which will help you to relax completely from  the long period of pressure caused by the exam（非限制性定語從句）．去旅行是個(gè)好主意，它有助于釋放由考試造成的壓力．
this is a good chance to keep them compay before you go to college．在你上大學(xué)之前，這是一個(gè)陪伴他們的好機(jī)會(huì)．

解答 Dear Jayson，
I am glad that you have finished the College Entrance Examination．Congrtulations to you．As for you holiday，here are some tips for you．（點(diǎn)題）
First and foremost，it is a good idea to have a nice trip，which will help you to relax completely from  the long period of pressure caused by the exam．（出去旅游）Second，you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to  learn some skills，such as swimming，driving，cooking and so on．（學(xué)習(xí)一技之長）All these skills will benefit you  a lot in your  life．Third，you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents．Therefore，this is a good chance to keep them compay before you go to college（陪伴父母）．Last but not least，why not  visit your former teachers，who gave you much help（探望老師）．
       All above is my advice．I expect you will have a happy and meaningful holiday（祝福）．
                                                                                                         Yours
                                                                                                         LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．寫作時(shí)，在文章的開頭，即第一段，你要寫寫明寫作目的，具體是要寫什么內(nèi)容．這一段的開始可以先引出事實(shí)，但最后一句要寫一個(gè)Themes．，即主題，這篇文章的中心議題．