Question

【題目】最近你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)做了一次關(guān)于"遇到困難找誰(shuí)幫忙"的問(wèn)卷調(diào)查,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，用英語(yǔ)為該報(bào)寫一篇120詞左右的短文， 簡(jiǎn)要分析調(diào)查結(jié)果，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。短文的標(biāo)題已為你寫好。

調(diào)查對(duì)象：你校高中生

調(diào)查人數(shù)：200人

調(diào)查方式：訪談

調(diào)查結(jié)果：(見(jiàn)下圖)

Whom Do You Turn to When in Trouble

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Answer 1

【答案】Whom Do You Turn to When in Trouble

Recently, the school English newspaper carried out a survey, concerning the topic whom students turn to when in trouble. With two hundreds senior high school students taking part, the survey results are as follows.

The majority of the students choose to share their trouble with their classmates or friends when in trouble, accounting for 53%. The reason is that the persons of the same age can put themselves in his or her shoes. Besides, there is no communication barrier. 28% of the students will turn to their teachers or parents, who have abundant experience and can be helpful. Surprisingly, 19% turn to nobody.

As far as I am concerned, we students are supposed to communicate with others frequently. Only in this way can we keep healthy mentally.

【解析】這是一篇圖表類作文。要求考生介紹圖表內(nèi)容。首先，考生應(yīng)明確調(diào)查對(duì)象，方式，人數(shù)，調(diào)查問(wèn)題。其次，考生應(yīng)根據(jù)圖表介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，即同學(xué)們的不同選擇。另外，考生還要對(duì)此結(jié)果做出分析，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。在這部分中，考生應(yīng)該注意要將圖表內(nèi)容介紹齊全，不要有所遺漏。該文章應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】所給范文內(nèi)容齊全，要點(diǎn)明確，長(zhǎng)短句交叉使用，表達(dá)自然得體。上下文連接自然，條理明確。適當(dāng)使用不同句式：1. 同位語(yǔ)從句：whom students turn to when in trouble 2. with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With two hundreds senior high school students taking part 3. 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞accounting for 53% 4. 表語(yǔ)從句that the persons of the same age can put themselves in his or her shoes 5. 定語(yǔ)從句who have abundant experience and can be helpful 6. 倒裝句Only in this way can we keep healthy mentally。