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【題目】如今，生活在大都市有許多優(yōu)勢(shì)，同時(shí)也有不少煩惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹城市生活的利與弊，并表明你的態(tài)度（是否喜歡城市生活）文章開(kāi)頭已給出。

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右；

2. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出；

3. 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙框內(nèi)作答。

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方便購(gòu)物	花銷大、住房昂貴
交通便利	空氣污濁
休閑、娛樂(lè)形式多樣	公交車擁擠

Nowadays living in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays living in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages.

There are a lot of good points living in big cities. First, it is easy for people to go shopping since most big cities have shopping centers. Convenient transportation is another reason for people to love city life. Buses, subways and taxis can take you anywhere you want. Besides, with all kinds of entertainment, one can never feel bored.

However, not all things are statisying. The biggest problem is the high expenses. Accommodation in big cities is so expensive that one can hardly afford it. Furthermore, the air in big cities is not so fresh as that in the counytryside. As for the transportation, it is often very crowded in public transport, especially in rush hours.

In spite of the disadvantages, I still love the life in big cities because it is full of excitement, which is appealing to young people.

【解析】試題分析本文屬于話題類寫(xiě)作，話題是城市生活的利與弊，要點(diǎn)以表格的形式給出。根據(jù)要求文章可分四段來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一段引入話題；第二段介紹城市生活的好處；第三段介紹城市生活的壞處；第四段總結(jié)全文，表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時(shí)注意要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)句要通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意：一定要注意給出自己對(duì)城市生活的看法。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】There are a lot of good points living in big cities現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語(yǔ)；it is easy for people to go shopping since most big cities have shopping centers. Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；Buses,subways and taxis can take you anywhere you want.句中使用定語(yǔ)從句；However, not all things are statisfying.句中運(yùn)用了部分否定；Accommodation in big cities is so expensive that one can hardly afford it.結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句用于句中；I still love the life in big cities because it is full of excitement, which is appealing to young people.原因狀語(yǔ)從句和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；另外，However, Furthermore, As for the transportation, In spite of the disadvantages,的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。