Question

【題目】假如你是李華，是你校English Club的團長。請你用英語給全校同學寫一封信，簡要闡述參加英語社團的好處，并建議大家踴躍參加。要點如下：

1. 鍛煉英語口語；

2. 提高溝通能力，廣交朋友；

3. 使學校生活更加豐富多彩。

注意：1. 100詞左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。

Dear schoolmates,

On behalf of our English Club I’d like to ______________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear schoolmates,

On behalf of our English Club I’d like to introduce the advantages of taking part in our activities. First of all, we can practice our spoken English because spoken English plays an important part in our English studies. Then we can also benefit a lot from communicating with each other. It can help us make more friends in the club. What’s more, as we are busy in studying and doing homework all day long, the club gives us chances to relax ourselves, which makes our school life happy and colorful.

So why not join us as soon as possible? Let’s do our best and make our club better and better!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，是你校English Club的團長。請你用英語給全校同學寫一封信，簡要闡述參加英語社團的好處，并建議大家踴躍參加。要點如下：1. 鍛煉英語口語；2. 提高溝通能力，廣交朋友；3. 使學校生活更加豐富多彩。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 100詞左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇英文書信。書信格式正確，內容齊全，結構嚴謹，使用高級句子。we can practice our spoken English because spoken English plays an important part in our English studies. Because引導原因狀語從句；as we are busy in studying and doing homework all day long, the club gives us chances to relax ourselves, which makes our school life happy and colorful. As引導的原因狀語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句完美結合；另外，F(xiàn)irst of all, What’s more, So why not join us as soon as possible?的運用為文章增色添彩。