Question

【題目】王明是紅星中學高一年級的學生。進入高中后，不知怎樣適應高中生活。請你以他好友的身份給他寫一封建議信。

內容包括以下要點：

1.多與老師溝通交流；

2.積極參與班級活動，盡快融入集體中；

3.與志趣相投的同學交朋友；

4………….

要求：1.詞數(shù)80~100次；

2.可適當發(fā)揮；

3.書寫要規(guī)范。

Dear Wang Ming,

I’m sorry you are having trouble with your high school life.

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I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours,

Zhang Jian

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Ming,

I’m sorry you are having trouble with your high school life.Firstly, the senior school life is different from the juniorschool life．Generally speaking, the teachers m senior school tend to adopt different teaching methods and they pay more attention to theability training . Therefore,my suggestion is that you should adjust totheir methods．Secondly, as senior students you are supposed toexplore your own learning methods, for effective learning methods aremole important．If you know how to learn you will make full use of yourspare time and make greater progress．

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours,

Zhang Jian

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求用英語寫一封建議信。要注意書信的格式和特殊用詞�？紤]用用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。要點：1.多與老師溝通交流；2.積極參與班級活動，盡快融入集體中；3.與志趣相投的同學交朋友……這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: be different from與……不同，Generally speaking一般而言。還使用了表語從句Therefore,my suggestion is that you should adjust totheir methods．和條件狀語從句If you know how to learn you will make full use of yourspare time and make greater progress．等多種句式結構，增加了文章的可讀性。