Question

假定你是李華，希望通過(guò)外籍教師Peter找一位英語(yǔ)筆友。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說(shuō)明為什么選這樣的筆友，具體條件包括：
1. 年齡  2. 性別  3. 愛(ài)好（旅游、運(yùn)動(dòng)、寵物等）
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
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Best regards,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。希望通過(guò)外籍教師Peter 找一位英語(yǔ)筆友。描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說(shuō)明為什么選這樣的筆友。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，象for instance, Furthermore,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis. 這句話(huà)用了定語(yǔ)從句， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. 這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子和原因狀語(yǔ)從句， With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. 這句話(huà)是whatever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，范文中還使用了 Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。
考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類(lèi)作文