Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩赴，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】 learn-learning

【2】Therefore-However

【3】at-from

【4】started-start

【5】all-both

【6】that-which

【7】去掉the

【8】choose-to choose

【9】model-models

【10】importantly-important

【解析】

試題分析： 當我還是小孩子的時候我練習小提琴，可是練來練去也不懂什么是真正的音樂，后來中學畢業(yè)后，朋友建議我學吉他，我對吉他是一見鐘情，以后每天都練習，吉他成了我生活最重要的部分。

【1】 learn-learning 考查固定短語。Spend…doing花時間做某事，動詞用-ing的形式。故把learn改成learning。

【2】Therefore-However 考查連詞。上下文語境，雖然我練小提琴有兩年，我還是不能理解何為真正的音樂，故用However表示轉折。

【3】at-from 考查介詞。Graduate from固定短語，從….畢業(yè)，故at改成from。

【4】started-start 考查動詞。主句用了suggest，后面的從句應該用虛擬語氣，即suggest that sb.(should) do sth。故 started改成start原形。

【5】all-both 考查代詞。根據上文a friend of mine可見我朋友和我兩個人認為，所以用both。

【6】that-which 考查關系代詞。介詞后面只能用which，which代指前文的 the day。故用which。

【7】去掉the 考查修飾詞的用法。First前面my和 the不能同時使用。故去掉the。

【8】choose-to choose 考查不定式動詞。It took sb. … to do sth.做某事花費某人多長時間。故用to choose。

【9】model-models 考查名詞復數。Several表示幾個，后面應該用可數名詞的復數形式，故model改成models。

【10】importantly-important 考查形容詞。這里應該用形容詞important修飾名詞part，最重要的部分。故用important。