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【題目】你是李華，你很煩惱。最近，每天早晚，你們小區(qū)廣場上都有很多人在跳廣場舞，持續(xù)時間長且噪音大，給你和小區(qū)里其他人帶來了很多的不便……請你給小區(qū)委員會領(lǐng)導(dǎo)寫封信，反映現(xiàn)象及其導(dǎo)致的不便（要求涉及生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作等方面）并提出合理建議。

詞數(shù)120左右；

短文的開關(guān)和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which

has made me terribly upset.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which

has made me terribly upset.

Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, which does help to keep healthy. However, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution caused by the loudspeaker really bring about unbearable inconveniences.

We can’t rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.

Here are some suggestions on solving the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life.

Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇書信類作文，需要寫出給小區(qū)委員會領(lǐng)導(dǎo)寫封信，反映現(xiàn)象及其導(dǎo)致的不便（要求涉及生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作等方面）并提出合理建議。需要注意：詞數(shù)120左右；短文的開關(guān)和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求學(xué)生要讀好題干，不要逐句翻譯，寫出自己的觀點。

亮點說明：本文考查了學(xué)生對書信類作文的寫作能力，運用了一般現(xiàn)在時，和進行時等時態(tài)，很好的寫出了文章所要求的各種觀點，真摯的寫出了自己面對的問題。而且文章錯誤較少，雖然不華麗，但是非常樸實，是一篇比較基礎(chǔ)的作文。