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3．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李明，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學(xué)張華，他一時(shí)無法融入新的班集體，感到很苦惱，請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給他寫一封信：
1．幫他分析原因，
2．給他提出建議（至少兩條）
3．陳述你幫助他的具體打算
注意：1、詞數(shù)：100左右；
2、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出；
3、請?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答
Dear Zhang Hua，
      ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點(diǎn)文．寫作時(shí)，首先要寫全要點(diǎn)，包括：分析原因，提出建議，具體方法；其次要注意用第一人稱來表達(dá)；最后要注意以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
have trouble in doing sth 做某事有困難
look down upon 瞧不起
take an active part in 積極參與
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
turn to sb for help 向某人求助
I think the biggest obstacle you meet with is yourself．
句中you meet with修飾obstacle，是一個(gè)定語從句，省略了連詞that．
Only in this way can you build a good relationship with our classmates．
句中only加狀語提前，句子要部分倒裝．
I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．
句中whenever連接讓步狀語從句．

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class．So I hope I can give you a hand．【說明寫信的理由】
     I think the biggest obstacle you meet with is yourself．（高分句型一） You maybe regard yourself as a newcomer and look down upon yourself．Besides，there may be some difficulty in language since you are not a native student．Thus you are too shy to communicate with classmates and teachers．【分析原因】
     In terms of these，I'd like to offer you some suggestions．First，you should try to get rid of the feelings of being frustrated and lonely．Second，you should learn to talk with others actively and take an active part in various activities．Only in this way can you build a good relationship with our classmates．（高分句型二）【提出建議】
     As for me，I'll encourage more students to study and play with you．Also，I'll help you with your study and daily life．In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．（高分句型三）【具體做法】
     I'm firmly convinced that you will soon become part of our class and you will enjoy it．
 Yours sincerely，
     Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．