【題目】假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生朋友Peter發(fā)郵件說，他正在學(xué)漢語，但感覺很吃力，請求你給予幫助。請給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1．舉例說明漢語學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)；

2．提供一些可行的建議。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【答案】Dear Peter,

Hope this email finds you well! Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties. It’s inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter, my suggestions are as follows:

Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis. Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.

Those are the tips on my mind now. I would always be pleased to offer you help. I do hope you will find to proposals practical.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇電子郵件。你的留學(xué)生朋友Peter正在學(xué)漢語，但感覺很吃力，發(fā)郵件請求你給予幫助。現(xiàn)在你給他回封郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已給出，成文時(shí)要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱；2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全：（1）舉例說明漢語學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)；（2）提供一些可行的建議。4.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，100單詞左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封電子郵件，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語句精煉，同時(shí)使用高級句子。Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties.賓語從句中but的使用恰到好處；It’s inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. Because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，while引導(dǎo)并列句，表示前后的鮮明對比，堪稱完美；With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter運(yùn)用定語從句；watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.動名詞短語作主語；I do hope you will find to proposals practical.強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語畫龍點(diǎn)睛；另外，as follows，F(xiàn)irstly, Besides的運(yùn)用讓文章層次清晰。

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