Question

【題目】假定你是李華, 是某中學(xué)國際部的一名學(xué)生。你有幸做外教Chris的向?qū)?/span>, 帶領(lǐng)他去當(dāng)?shù)匾患也宛^品嘗中國美食。請你按如下提示給對方寫一封郵件, 告知這次行程安排。

1. 飯店情況 2. 出發(fā)時間、地點3. 交通方式

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：specialty 特色菜

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris，

I’m so honored to serve as your guide to a local restaurant to taste traditional Chinese food. The restaurant enjoys a good reputation and has won a China Time-honored Brand title. The environment is clean and elegant, not to mention its high-quality dishes as well as its top services. The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty, which I do believe you will have a good feast on.

By the way, it is convenient to get there by bus, for it is just within easy reach of the downtown. We will meet at the bus stop near our school this Sunday morning. Bus No. 9 will directly take us there.

Wish you a good time.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，告知行程安排。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)榮幸

2.告知相關(guān)情況

1）飯店情況。（introduction to the restaurant）

2）出發(fā)時間、地點。（time and place to meet ）

3) 交通方式。（way to get there）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be honored to; enjoy a good reputation; not to mention; as well as ; traditional and unique; convenient; within easy reach; directly

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m so honored to serve as your guide to a local restaurant to taste traditional Chinese food.

2. The restaurant enjoys a good reputation

3. not to mention its high-quality dishes as well as its top services.

4. The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty

5. it is convenient to get there by bus, for it is just within easy reach of the downtown.

6. Bus No. 9 will directly take us there.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改