Question

【題目】假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點：

焦慮癥狀： 頭暈、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

建議：1.考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計劃

2.考試期間正常作息

3.睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠

4.其他建議(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)

注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思;

3. 詞數(shù)：120個左右。開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯： 癥狀：symptom; 頭暈: dizzy(adj.) ; 食欲：appetite ; 熬夜：stay up

熱水澡：a warm bath

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior Two, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some

symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

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Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Ming of Senior Two, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信類作文，需要寫出建議，有以下幾點建議：1.考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計劃；2.考試期間正常作；3.睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠； 4.其他建議(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)，注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思3. 詞數(shù)：120個左右。開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。

亮點說明：本文用了以第一人稱為主的寫作方式，開門見山的說明了要點；用了first of all,beside等詞分點寫出了自己的建議。以我為人稱，我們?yōu)橹黧w寫出學(xué)生普遍存在的問題，并且提出建議。文章不華麗，卻樸實，字?jǐn)?shù)也在要求的范圍內(nèi)。