Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

Speaking of campus clubs, people usually think of conventional ones like roller-skating or music clubs. But now, society and club culture is seeing more diversity, with students interests covering a wide field.

Yu joined the club a month ago after he saw a big paper elephant on display at the society and club recruiting fair (招新大會(huì)). “It was made by the club chairman, who s my age,” says Yu. “His work aroused my interest in origami (折紙).” According to Yu, the club was formed by a group of students who love the art of origami. “Though I ve never tried origami before, I m impressed by their love of it and I want to learn it myself,” he says.

Other than treating societies and clubs as a way of entertainment, some students now use them to broaden their horizons, help their studies, and prepare for a future career. Some societies and clubs like this include extra tuition clubs, straight-A student clubs, and start-up business clubs.

Cui Ye, 19, is the co-founder of the straight-A student club at Beihang University. The economics major student wanted to improve her academic performance, so she set up the study club together with her friends. “The club has attracted dozens of students. We urge each other to study hard and practise self-study activities after class,” says Cui. “I think the club has made studying less boring and difficult.”

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2.用約120個(gè)詞就“學(xué)校里的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)會(huì)不會(huì)影響到學(xué)習(xí)?”這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行討論,內(nèi)容包括:

(1)你參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)的情況;

(2)談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)和社團(tuán)活動(dòng)之間的關(guān)系;

(3)你認(rèn)為學(xué)生應(yīng)該要怎么才能平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。

[寫作要求]

1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

By providing us with experience of two students, the passage shows the benefits of joining campus clubs, including helping with their entertainment, broadening their sight and imagination, helping with their studies and preparing for a future career.

When it comes to the campus activities, I immediately remember the first day when I came to this school and saw the bicycle club taking in its new members. Leaning that it was good for me to develop my interest and build up my body, I therefore signed up my name to join it. I took exercise and enjoyed myself every day. Gradually, I felt energetic but my studies fell behind others, which worried my parents as well as myself.

Undoubtedly, campus activities and studies influence each other. When handled properly, campus activities can refresh us, enabling us to be more enthusiastic for studies. What’s more, during the activities, we apply the theory into practice, which of course helps to broaden our horizons. On the other hand, as energy and time are limited, too much devotion to the activities may wear us out, resulting disappointing grades in our studies.

We ought to strike a balance between campus activities and studies. Firstly, as a student, studies must come first, so we have to spend enough time and energy on the lessons to guarantee our excellent academy performance. And then, since colorful campus activities can light up our school life, we can choose a certain suitable activities to enjoy ourselves and live our young life to the fullest.

【解析】

試題分析：要先讀懂文章，用簡(jiǎn)練的語(yǔ)言概括文章要點(diǎn)，注意詞數(shù)在30個(gè)左右。關(guān)于“學(xué)校里的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)會(huì)不會(huì)影響到學(xué)習(xí)?”這個(gè)主題，要從三個(gè)方面來(lái)寫：(1)你參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)的情況;(2)談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)和社團(tuán)活動(dòng)之間的關(guān)系;(3)你認(rèn)為學(xué)生應(yīng)該要怎么才能平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。要結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，可以使用自己親身經(jīng)歷的事情。要注意正確使用連接詞，使文章通順連貫。還要運(yùn)用亮點(diǎn)詞匯以及優(yōu)秀句式，為文章增色。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如I immediately remember the first day when I came to this school and saw the bicycle club taking in its new members.是定語(yǔ)從句。Gradually, I felt energetic but my studies fell behind others, which worried my parents as well as myself. 是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)broadening their sight and imagination, apply the theory into practice，ight up our school life等。文章使用了When it comes to，therefore，Gradually，On the other hand等，使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。