Question

你校做了一個關(guān)于中學(xué)生睡眠、飲食和休閑等生活習(xí)慣的調(diào)查, 發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生最常見的不良生活習(xí)慣: 晚上熬夜; 不吃早餐上學(xué), 常吃方便面; 長時間上網(wǎng)聊QQ和玩游戲。請根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇不少于100詞的短文,要求:
簡述這些壞習(xí)慣可能產(chǎn)生的不良影響。
呼吁廣大中學(xué)生培養(yǎng)健康的睡眠、飲食和休閑的習(xí)慣。
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Let’s develop a healthy lifestyle
According to a survey among middle school students, many students have the following bad habits:

Answer 1

Let’s develop a healthy lifestyle
According to a survey among middle school students, many students have the following bad habits: staying up late into the night; going to school without breakfast and often eating instant noodles; spending too much time chatting on QQ or playing computer games.
As we know, if you often stay up late at night, you will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrate in class. Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles instead of meals will cause a lack of nutrition. Spending too much time on QQ or computer games will do harm to your eyes.
In terms of study and health, we should develop a healthy lifestyle. First, go to bed a bit earlier instead of staying up late. Second, keep a balanced diet to build up our bodies. Third, don’t spend too much time on the Internet. Actually, there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves, such as doing sports or listening to music.

試題分析：這是提綱類寫作，話題是抽煙的危害問題，文章的要點是以提綱的形式給出來的，不是很具體，內(nèi)容有：1，簡述這些壞習(xí)慣可能產(chǎn)生的不良影響；2. 呼吁廣大中學(xué)生培養(yǎng)健康的睡眠、飲食和休閑的習(xí)慣。.考生需要做的就是以提綱為中心，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，考生要自己去發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容充實難度，這也增加了作文的難度，要求學(xué)生有很高的拓展能力，在確定寫作內(nèi)容后，考生要考慮的是選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。
【亮點說明】這篇文章涵蓋了要點，簡潔又不乏好的短語和句型： do harm to對…有害， In terms of 就…而言，develop a healthy lifestyle培養(yǎng)健康的生活方式，. instead of 代替，build up建立， varieties of各種各樣的， As we know, if you often stay up late at night, you will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrate in class. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles instead of meals will cause a lack of nutrition.這句話用了動名詞做主語，還有范文還使用了First, Second, Third,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。