Question

假定你是李華，于2014年4月1日搭乘國外某航空公司航班(Flight BA793)回國后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個行李箱（suitcase）現(xiàn)請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信，請他們幫你尋找。
信件要點包括：
1.陳述寫信原因;     2.簡要描述該行李;   3.說明其重要性；4.期待回復并表示感謝
注意：1.信件格式已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)120左右
Dear Sir or Madam， 
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
LiHua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on April 1, 2014. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is my father who sent it to me on my birthday.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析:寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文分三段寫出了寫信的原因，第一段，寫信的原因。第二段描述行李和它的重要性；最后表示感謝。內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚。并注意了句子開頭的變化和銜接。同時文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如look forward to、Thanks for和when、because等引導的狀語從句。
考點:提綱類作文。