【題目】假定你是李華，最近在某英文論壇上看到一名叫Jonah的澳大利亞高中生發(fā)的帖子，他提到自己想結(jié)交一位中國(guó)朋友以便學(xué)習(xí)川�。�Sichuan Opera)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)意愿；

2.幫助方式；

3.期待回復(fù)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【答案】Dear Jonah，

How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!

I'd like to be your friend and help you realize your dream, for my dad is working as an actor in one of the Sichuan Opera theaters in Chengdu. My dad is open-minded as well as easy-going. I'm sure he can be helpful. As for me, I'm a senior high school student as you are. I believe we have much to share and can get along well with each other.

Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生回一封郵件給想結(jié)交一位中國(guó)朋友以便學(xué)習(xí)川劇的澳大利亞高中生Jonah，告知他你愿意幫助他學(xué)習(xí)川劇。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 表達(dá)意愿；

2. 幫助方式；

3. 期待回復(fù)。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

show love for；help sb. do sth.；work as；as well as；get along well with

第三步：連詞成句

1. It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!

2. I'd like to be your friend and help you realize your dream, for my dad is working as an actor in one of the Sichuan Opera theaters in Chengdu.

3. My dad is open-minded as well as easy-going.

4. I believe we have much to share and can get along well with each other.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實(shí)：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

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