Question

假設(shè)你和你朋友在中山公園散步時(shí)遇到的一件事，請根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文。
【寫作內(nèi)容】

時(shí)間	上星期六下午
地點(diǎn)	在中山公園的湖邊
事件	我和朋友在散步，湖中一個(gè)小女孩在呼救。我們沒來得及脫衣服就跳進(jìn)湖中將她救上岸，對她做了人工呼吸，并在她恢復(fù)知覺后，送她去醫(yī)院。我們還打電話通知她的家長。最終小女孩得救了。
評價(jià)	家長很感激，醫(yī)生對我們的急救給予高度評價(jià)。
感受	懂得急救只是很重要。

 
參考詞匯：急救 first aid
【寫作要求】
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。
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結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、內(nèi)容完整和篇章連貫。  _______________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

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Last Saturday afternoon, my friend and I were walking by the lake in Zhongshan Park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in the lake. We hurried to jump into the lake without taking off our clothes, swam towards her and pulled her out. Then we made her breathe using mouth-to-mouth way before she came to herself, sent her to hospital and telephoned her parents. Afterwards, we were told that the girl was saved because of the timely rescue.
Her parents were very thankful to us and the doctors thought highly of our first aid, which made us realize that knowing first aid is very important for everyone.

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