Question

每個人都有感到特別沮喪的時候，但是我們應該學會克服這種情緒，振作精神。請以 "How I Overcame Depression”為題，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文，短文內容包括：
1. 描述一件使你感到特別沮喪的事情；
2. 說明你是如何克服沮喪以及你的感受。
注意：文章的標題已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。
How I Overcame Depression
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           

Answer 1

How I Overcame Depression
The final exam of last term was drawing near. Knowing what it meant for a Senior Three student, I buried myself in study. So many nights found me burning the midnight oil. I thought I was well prepared. Sometimes, however, hard work was just not enough. It couldn’t be more depressing when I stared at my low rank, my mind going blank. But my pride didn’t allow me to appear weak. So I stayed locked away, refusing to talk to anyone.
Fortunately, it wasn’t long before I realized what I was doing was actually hurting those who care about me and doing myself no good. So I went to seek help from my parents. With them motivating me, my depression faded away. Now I have the confidence to win the battle in my Senior Three and brave any difficulty in my life.

解析試題分析：題目要求以“How I Overcame Depression”為題，寫一篇英語短文，介紹自己是如何克服悲觀情緒的。詞數(shù)在100-120之間。作文可以分兩部分，第一部分描述一件令人沮喪的事情；第二部分介紹克服沮喪的過程和自己的感受。
【亮點說明】范文使用了draw near，buried myself in，stared at，faded away等短語，使作文內容比較充實；
范文使用了較多的語法知識：非謂語動詞Knowing what it meant for a Senior Three student，refusing to talk to anyone；with復合結構With them motivating me；主語從句what I was doing；定語從句who care about me等，語法知識掌握、運用的較為熟練；
范文還注意使用However, Fortunately等來銜接上下文，使作文顯得比較緊湊，連接緊密。
考點：命題類作文